Concept 13 #1

There are choices, risks and roads I sometimes wished I had taken in my life. I would've gotten some tattoos already even thought I'm going to get them later on in my life, but now would cause more of a conflict due to my age and living arrangement. There are many other things I wished I could've done in my life, but I don't think I'd be in the same path I am now. Maybe some of my choices that I didn't choose are going to appear or happen later on in my life, and maybe even some of the choices I did would've never really happened or could've happened later in my life.

Screenplay Revision

Everything underlined is new to my part of the script.

FULTON

(to Jaime)

How’s he doing?! Can I see him?!

JAMIE

He's not doing too good, doctors are trying everything they can right now.

FULTON

What do you think?! DO you think they'll save him for a little longer?!

JAMIE

I'm not too sure.

(starts to weep)

FULTON

(hesitantly)

Hi mom...

MRS. REED

Hi sweetie, I'm really glad that you came.

FULTON

Yeah, How are you holding up right now?

MRS. REED

I'm doing my best to stay strong and hope for the best. I’m soo sorry we didn't support you son.

FULTON

Don't worry about it. It’s my fault, I shouldn’t’ve let it get in the way.

(DOCTOR begins to approach family)

DOCTOR

I'm really sorry to be the bear of bad new, but there was nothing we could've done for your husband. I'm sorry to say that he has passed.

Concept 10 #1-3

1. I believe that I know murder investigations, sports & animation films, being a high school student & being a part of a family as well. This could help my expertise in a short film by looking for an accurate storyline & even create my own short film.
2. I could ask my parents or family members that may know or have heard about my unfamiliar subject, I could look for some books at the library about it, or even do some research online & look at many websites & reports about my subject.
3.  I don't really know much about literature. I would most likely show a short film of Romeo & Juliet, regardless that being shakespeare, it is also a part of literature. I would interview english majors & english teachers/students who know english literature very well.

Concept 9 #1

I'm using Jake Sully from Avatar, the setting from The Dark Knight, & the main conflict from Transformers: Dark of the Moon.
Jake Sully would be trying to stop the decepticons from bringing their world Cybertron to Gotham City. Jake Sully would be his normal human self, but at night he could use his avatar body, almost similar to Batman(Bruce Wayne during the day, Batman at night). The decepticons would take over Gotham City & close off the city to recreate their world, Cybertron. Jake Sully would stop them by destroying the main pillar(just like in Transformers).
This "new" film could appeal to those who enjoy Transformers or Avatar.  It would be a thrilling action movie that would include a very well developed storyline as well. My audience would mainly be the mainstream population ages (12-35) that like action & a storyline movie.

Concept 8 #3

My 5-minute short story would contain of a rock star at a cemetery, holding a notebook that holds his thoughts & songs, seeing many deaths of rock stars that he once knew before. The cemetery he is at is to see his former band mate, who passed a year ago, & he holds his notebook with him for him to rethink about what his life should be like & the songs he should write/sing.

Short Script Reflection

I think that my best scene was my beginning at Rick's Diner, because I was able to detail very well the diner & expressions both exterior & interior. It brought out the problem, & an issue the hero had to face. My worst scene would probably be where Fulton is at his condo thinking about his problem & what he should do. I think I can improve some more on my script, but I believe it's at an adequate level.