Wednesday, September 14, 2011

Screenplay Revision

Everything underlined is new to my part of the script.

FULTON
(to Jaime)
How’s he doing?! Can I see him?!
JAMIE
He's not doing too good, doctors are trying everything they can right now.
FULTON
What do you think?! DO you think they'll save him for a little longer?!
JAMIE
I'm not too sure.
(starts to weep)
FULTON
(hesitantly)
Hi mom...
MRS. REED
Hi sweetie, I'm really glad that you came.
FULTON
Yeah, How are you holding up right now?
MRS. REED
I'm doing my best to stay strong and hope for the best. I’m soo sorry we didn't support you son.
FULTON
Don't worry about it. It’s my fault, I shouldn’t’ve let it get in the way.
(DOCTOR begins to approach family)
DOCTOR
I'm really sorry to be the bear of bad new, but there was nothing we could've done for your husband. I'm sorry to say that he has passed.

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