Short Script Reflection

I think that my best scene was my beginning at Rick's Diner, because I was able to detail very well the diner & expressions both exterior & interior. It brought out the problem, & an issue the hero had to face. My worst scene would probably be where Fulton is at his condo thinking about his problem & what he should do. I think I can improve some more on my script, but I believe it's at an adequate level.